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Showing posts with label Mrs Gilmore. Show all posts

Wednesday, 13 November 2019

ePortfolio Reading Term 4

Processes and strategies

Students will:
Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies with developing confidence to identify, form, and express ideas.

Indicators:

  • selects and reads texts for enjoyment and personal fulfilment
  • recognises and understands the connections between oral, written, and visual language
  • integrates sources of information and prior knowledge with developing confidence to make sense of increasingly varied and complex texts
  • selects and uses a range of processing and comprehension strategies with growing understanding and confidence
  • thinks critically about texts with developing confidence
  • monitors, self-evaluates, and describes progress with growing confidence.

I came up with some good questions and I wrote nice and neatly

Monday, 11 November 2019

Traditional gathering and harvesting of kai

WALT investigate traditional gathering and harvesting of Kai

Diet

  • birds
  • fish
  • wild herbs
  • roots
  • potato
  • kumara
Cooking
  • hangi, underground oven
  • pools of boiling water or steam
Tools

  • wood for snares and tools
  • Harakeke for  ropes, fishing lines and nets
  • Bird and whale bones for fishhook

Sunday, 10 November 2019

eportfolio term 4

REPORT WRITING


Level 2 & 3 Achievement Objectives:


Select and use sources of information, processes, and strategies with some confidence to identify, form, and express ideas.


Show some understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.


Select, form, and express ideas on a range of topics.


Use language features appropriately, showing some understanding of their effects.


Organise texts, using a range of structures.


Insert a picture of your draft report here - it must be clear


Publish your writing here


Self Reflection: I could have written more


In this piece of writing I talked about when the babies come.


My next step is write a bit longer

The laughing owl is a medium bird found in NZ and is now extinct.


The laughing owl lays 2 eggs in September and October. Eggs are hatched in October and November. The eggs are looked after by their mother.

Wednesday, 21 August 2019

Narrative: Bella the Dog

  Bella  was a nice  dog  but her step sisters they were so mean, they were bossy. 

Her sisters names are Sasha and Lily.  One day Bella if she could go to the dog park.  "No" said Lily and Sasha.  "You can't go to the park because you have to clean the house."

As Lily and Sasha said no, Bella went to her room as she went to her room she made a plan to escape so she could get away from drama.

                                         
Image result for princess dog

Wednesday, 31 July 2019

My Narrative

It   was   a  beautiful  day  of  fun.  we  went  to  go   on  the  haunted  roller coaster.
While we  were  waiting  my  two brothers'  were   scared  to  go  on.  As  we  went
to  go  up and down  but it stopped  at the top because  the tr all  broke. Then  everyone
started to scream. The  police started to come and the ambulance and  helicopters came
to rescue everybody and everyone was safe.

Wednesday, 10 April 2019

EPortfolio Sampe - Science Term 1



Savannah you have shown a good understanding of the pH scale and you are able to clearly explain your findings.
You have also gained a good knowledge of what an acid and a base is.
Your next learning step is to continue to work on forming your Inquiry questions using open language.
Well done!
Mrs G.


Wednesday, 20 March 2019

E-Portfolio: Camp Writing

Describe It - Camp Experiences
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
  • Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
  • Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.


Level 4.
  • Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
  • Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.


Learning goals:
  • To ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ the reader by painting a picture with words.
  • A variety of sentence starters
  • A variety of sentence lengths
  • Edit and rework
  • Effective peer checking and feedback


The  big giant  swing.
When I went on the giant swing I was so excited
to go on it and I also felt like my tummy was  going up and down. And while
my tummy was going up and down.


I saw how scared my friend was and cheered her on. She took a big deep
breath as she was being pulled up into the very tall tree.



Student Comment:
In my writing, one of my goals is to re-read writing to check it makes sense.
I did show this goal here because  all sentences make sense.

In my writing, one of my goals is to express feelings about the topic.
I did show this goal here because is expressed how I was feeling.

My next learning step is to keep working on my spelling.


Teacher Comment:
Savannah, this is such a great piece of writing.  You have improved so much with your sentences.  I like the way you have used adjectives to help describe.  Your next step is to re-read and check if you have repeated your sentences.  - Mrs Hunter





Sunday, 19 August 2018

Maths Week


We were asked to make a Marble Run.  I made it with Andrea.  It works very well and I'm proud of it.


This is my chalk drawing. I went outside and I drew a flower in the middle then the sun on the outside.






This is my scavenger hunt collage, I had to find circles and different shapes.







I did an owl drawing but I lost it.